Special Place

[Yuliya]

Yet another poem I wrote awhile ago, in fact, all of the poems I've posted here so far have been written awhile ago. If I remember correctly, this is Nariel's favorite poem written by me!

Special Place

There are days
when worries overflow your mind
and people are causing nothing but pain
Days that seem to be dipped in depression
Those days
you need a special place
To curl up
To wake up
To fess up
To look up
To live up

There are days
when nobody understands
they just lie and say they do
or say nothing at all
Those days
you need a special place
To curl up
To wake up
To fess up
To look up
To live up

There are days
when it all seems overwhelming
And life seems like too much work
and you haven't got the guts
Those days
you need a special place
To curl up
To wake up
To fess up
To look up
To live up

There are days
when you see something incredibly sad
And the world seems too cruel
To be a place you want to live
Those days
you need a special place
To curl up
To wake up
To fess up
To look up
To live up

There are days
when you feel a love so great
It takes up your entire body
and nothing else seems to matter
Those days
All you need is me

[Peregrine]

I like the repetition of "To wake up, to curl up," etc...in every stanza. It gives it a great rhythem when it's read aloud, nice work, I'll be looking forward to more.

[moiravitrella]

I love that poem. And I agree with The Blue Falcon. The repetition is a very touch. Good job!